Ok, here are some initial thoughts on changes needed on the landing page
operate-first.cloud.
The focus needs to change from being community cloud centric.
Change 1
The banner statement currently is "
Operate First >> Building an all-Open Source community cloud to learn and make things* better"How about : Operate FIrst >> Building an open source community for cloud operations"
Change 2
Next the question needs to change from "Why build an all-Open Source community cloud?"
How about: "Why build an open community centered on cloud operations?
The paragraph that follows needs no changes.
Let's start with these 2. Other changes with links will be needed on the main page too.
But let's work on these two first.